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Desert Fire

A Song of the Arabian Stallion

By mahmoud elsaadPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

By sands that shimmer, sun-baked bright,

A steed of fire, a wondrous sight.

Coat like satin, night's deepest hue,

A stallion proud, the desert's due.

His mane, a torrent, windblown and free,

Eyes like embers, wild and keen they see.

Muscles ripple with each powerful stride,

A heart of thunder, a king to confide.

Hooves that pound the endless dunes,

A tireless spirit chasing moons.

He carries warriors, brave and bold,

Across the sands where shadows unfold.

More swift than falcons in their flight,

A loyal friend through day and night.

From scorching sun and burning wind's sting,

The desert horse, on tireless wing.

His whinny, a song that poets praise,

A legend whispered through desert days.

In tents of nomads, stories told,

Of courage, freedom, desert gold.

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  • Angela Shiflett2 years ago

    LOVE THIS! :)

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