Depression Isn't For Men Is It
It’s not a thing for men. depression is a woman's thing
Depression Swallow The Storm
Depression is not for a man,
that’s a woman’s weight, they say.
Men are strong,
made to stand like stone,
to fight their battles in silence,
to bleed without a sound.
So he doesn’t speak.
Not when his hands tremble
He can’t show he is so weak,
not when sleep slips away
and the ceiling becomes
his only witness.
Tears burn his eyes,
but men don’t cry.
He learned that long before
he knew what sorrow was,
like learning to grip a hammer
or bite his tongue.
So battle on.
Don’t seek help,
they’ll only laugh.
Call you weak,
ask why a man
would ever break.
when the storm rises inside him,
he swallows it down,
again and again.
That is because the world,
was never taught
to hold a man’s pain.
Maybe tomorrow,
when he can’t carry on,
his view will change.
He will get help maybe.
When you live alone,
it’s hard to cope with this.
Still no one hears your cry for help
till it’s too late.
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Marie381Uk
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Comments (23)
Reality is mentioned in your poem. I see myself in your art. Thank you Marie
Finally, I get a chance to actually read your work. Let me give you my gut reaction. I saw myself with my mouth hanging open and in the end, I was crying. That's the truth. Oh my God Marie, you are so super brilliant. I definitely will be following you closely.
You surely did your title proud. It's sad to think how prevalent this is even in modern-day society. Congratulations on your top story. A powerhouse of expression!
Powerful words with profound meaning! I love it! Congratulations on making it to the top story!
This is some powerful verse! Well done and congrats on the top story!
Fantastic work Marie! Very Powerful & Insightful!
Nicely done! Very proud of you Marie for getting Top Story! Keep up the amazing work!
The world was never taught to hold a man's pain. Nicely Done!! Congratulations on top story!!
Great job! This is amazing!!
keep working hard
I knew this one would get top Story. Very Proud of you Marie.
Beautiful work Marie👏
Heart-wrenching—society’s silence on men’s pain really cuts deep here.
I love this piece, it reminds me of the song by Dax "To be a man" there is so much truth here and as others said very well written!
Well written, congrats 👏
Very empathetic and kind poem
strength, sadness and encouragement all shine through here. Men are told to be strong, but emotions are stronger, able to tear any wall down. Thank you for sharing, Marie.
I love it.
Wow, very deep.
Societal expectations are a scourge. Depression is the worst illness. Fantastic poem Marie.
Well said, Marie. Depression doesn't care about gender.
This hit me really deep Mine isn't clinical but still it's there and causing problems We should share a lot more than we do, but the problem is in find people who are willing to listen to us. Listen without judgement. Listen with kindness and forgive us for not expressing ourselves perfectly as we learn how to healthily express ourselves. Sadly, those things are extremely rare on this planet. And it's one reason that I think men need at least a few close friends who are also men. In my experience, they're way less likely to treat us with derision when we have what I call "unapproved" feelings. Growing up, my dad tried desperately to teach me that my feelings matter and I need to learn how to express them in healthy ways. Mom's lessons stuck a bit better. Men don't cry and if you cry, then you'll be ignored for a few days until you learn to be a man. Brutal stuff.
This is a very sad and yet caring poem for men and women to share. Depression does not care whether you a woman or man. Good job and we men really should share more than we do.