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Dear Moon, Are You Listening?

A midnight confession to the silent witness hanging over every heart.

By Milan MilicPublished 2 months ago 1 min read

Dear Moon, old lantern nailed into the sky,

I write at last and wait for your reply.

You’ve watched empires crumble into dust and stone,

Yet still you find me here, awake, alone.

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You’ve sailed above caravans crossing the sand,

A silver compass cupped in the traveler’s hand.

You’ve kissed wooden masts on the midnight sea,

And still make tides out of the dark in me.

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Do you remember the nights I was small?

Tracing your face on my bedroom wall?

I swore you winked through the windowpane.

A quiet god with a child’s last name.

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You’ve heard every wish that I never said,

The arguments replaying in my head,

The soft “I’m fine” that was never true,

The prayers I aimed at the stars—and you.

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Tell me, pale witness above my street,

Do all lost secrets gather at your feet?

Do lovers’ promises, broken in two,

Turn into craters shining back through you?

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If I confess that I’m tired and scared,

Of futures blurred and pasts that can’t be repaired,

Will you keep watch while I learn to be

A little more gentle with this fragile me?

~~

So take this letter, this rhyming release,

Fold it in light and deliver me peace.

If you’ve been waiting for my voice all along,

Answer in ripples of silver and song.

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Until then, keep glowing over my night.

Old faithful witness, my borrowed light.

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About the Creator

Milan Milic

Hi, I’m Milan. I write about love, fear, money, and everything in between — wherever inspiration goes. My brain doesn’t stick to one genre.

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  • Sandy Gillman2 months ago

    Such a beautiful piece. It captures that quiet, comforting connection we all have with the moon.

  • Harper Lewis2 months ago

    I see the connection to your fiction piece that I just fell in love with. Beautiful.

  • Harper Lewis2 months ago

    Haven’t read yet, but so glad our birds are feeding each other: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/building-birds%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">

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