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Dear Melissos

An Acrostic Alexandrine

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
Dear Melissos
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Melissos did not cry when he felt the outside world for the first time, since his mother, Goddess Athena, made it so. I would have surely cried upon leaving Athena’s safe womb for this so-called new world, although I would have rejoiced as soon as I beheld, at least in my mind, the love in her eyes. My little heart would have capitulated without her hand caressing it from every angle. Melissos’ small heart was large in another way, as a part of Athena corticated through it like her original olive tree.

Death will come for you too, dear Melissos, my boy

Entreating you to accept its absence of joy

Admonishing any resistance to its force

Relegating every effort to live, off course

Meandering at first, we will keep it at bay

Enveloped in its shrouds of mysterious fey

Love will help to subdue its unrelenting step

Inwards and beyond, where eternal doth two-step

Sleep only to awake stronger and full of aim

Serving no one except your Olympian name

O Athena my love now and forevermore

Save us as well from the fourth and final world war

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About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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