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Dear Dandy Dingy

'Dear Inanimate Lover ' -An Unofficial Vocal Challenge

By Oneg In The ArcticPublished 8 months ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2025
Dear Dandy Dingy
Photo by James Kelly-Smith on Unsplash

Dear Beat-Up Dandy Dingy,

The holes you've left in my heart has brought on more water than the hole that rock punctured in you.

I am filled with salt that never dries enough.

My glass fogs misty.

I am oh so far from you.

Do you remember that one riverside picnic? You were covered with crumbs.

We laughed as ant legs tickled your insides, your wooden sides creaking with joy.

It was such a beautiful day.

But now, we are miles apart, seperated by more than just walls and water.

I stand here, peppered with responsibility, and sticky with regret.

I long to be back in your embrace, swaying to the current of our love.

Maybe one day, we'll float away into the sunset. Maybe one day you'll save me. We'll patch each other up, only to spill into one another again.

I miss you terribly.

Love always,

Your sprinkle of seasoning, the shaker of your soul,

Salt.

-

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About the Creator

Oneg In The Arctic

A queer storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.

Co-founder of Queer Vocal Voices

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  • Tim Carmichael8 months ago

    I love the way you’ve turned something so simple into a beautiful, bittersweet story. Salt and Dingy have a connection that’s both fragile and strong, like something worth holding onto, even if it’s broken. Congrats on top story!

  • Cyrus8 months ago

    Congrats on TS!

  • This is incredibly clever and touching...."swaying to the current of our love" (chef's kiss)

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  • its_ishfaq_ahmad8 months ago

    that's amazing

  • Nurul Islam8 months ago

    Nice work

  • Susan Fourtané 8 months ago

    Top Story! 🎉 Congratulations!

  • Melissa Ingoldsby8 months ago

    Congrats on your top story homie you are awesome

  • Melissa Ingoldsby8 months ago

    Ohhh so many gorgeous lines here my friend!! A brilliant love story

  • Amazing!

  • Susan Fourtané 8 months ago

    Oh the poor thing! 😞

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡8 months ago

    This makes me so sad! The ocean is such a salty bitch! ⚡💙⚡

  • Absence, deftly seasoned with longing. Did something happen, my friend?

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