Everything would have
Coalesced perfectly in
That single, lost hour
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D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.
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A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of us… my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the day’s oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along — apace with a sloth — has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶3 days ago in Petlife
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I'm just so grateful we don't have that here in Malaysia because I can never seem to grasp what daylight saving is 😅😅
The feeling of ‘what if?’ and missed opportunities is so relatable here! Fantastic senryu!
It definitely threw us all off!
Ha. Yep. I was waddling around like a zombie looking for my lost hour.
Bahaha! If only! 😄 I really hope I’m interpreting the humour right in the last two Senryu of yours I’ve read, as that is the response I’m having.
Nice work. Question what was the trigger for this story? You peaked my interests. :)