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Date Night

the first hour

By Forest GreenPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Date Night
Photo by Lon Christensen on Unsplash

A boy walked across the street

Saw a girl exhausted by the heat

She asked him for his name

As he asked her for the same

He labeled her ex boyfriend lame

Because of his lack of game

The two of them went on a date

He stared at her long thick black hair

And her short thick beautiful brown eyes

She has a very wide but nice smile

He looks down below her necklace

While she looks at the grease in his brown hair

With more silk than the leather jacket he wore

More brighter than the light on the candlestick on the table

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About the Creator

Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy. I also appreciate tips, and would like my stories should be noticed.

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  • Sid Aaron Hirjiabout a year ago

    leading to a date????

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Where could this be leading even for a first date. Good job.

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