Danse Macabre
Dance with Death's Ballerina on a Silently Operatic Stage
D anse Macabre for me as Macbeth didst with Macduff, whispered the ghastly ballerina..
I gnite with your swaying body's passion mine very molten core.. Crisp mine bony swirling remains to ash with your tapping dori shoes..
S moldering Swan Bands, Smoky, Enshrouded .. Singe/Scatter mine tattered remains with the beating, drumming heart of your living, breathing, dancing anatomy:
T alented..., Lithe..., Acrobatic..., Living, Breathing..., Manly Anatomical Marvel that you are.
R accourci your en pointe shod feet into the mired, worm-riddled bony marrow of mine hollowed skull.
A fter, once thou too hast shuffled from this mortal
C oil, we may together ignite a spark.. A Phantasmagoric Conflagration to set the very sulfuric pits of Hell Afire once more.
T ogether in spirit ... Forever ... Phantoms of this Haunted Opera
I nvitation to Eternal Encores ... No Final Curtains Called
O n this .. DEATH's Nocturnal Macabre BackStage Production
N one too soon the wavering, distracting rays - dawn aborning - bring surcease with dew laden drips of watery light... Mine apparition blessedly, hopefully, dancing off stage left to the next phase in her eternal DANSE MACABRE BALLET.
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
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