Dancing with the Elements
Entangled in their Songs
By BPublished 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read
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One with my twin flame
embers crack a steady beat
as we sway in tune.
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Waltzing with tall trees
the perfect partners come fall
when leaves twirl along.
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Sailing the sea's breeze
winds from heaven carry me,
whispering their songs.
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Swept up in a wave
soaked by my courter's embrace,
I drown in his love.
About the Creator
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I have a few stories and poems inside me that I want to share. Maybe, if I'm lucky, they'll reach people who'll enjoy them. 📖
Comments (4)
This has a steady beat, and that rhythm carries throughout the entire quad-ku with its theme of dancing. It was like reading a formal ballet performance whilst watching the world go by from a glass window or while sitting in the upper rows while peering through the spyglass.
Beautifully done.
"i drown in his love" great final line!
Love, love, love!!! This was really beautiful. I love how you related the elements to dance. The whole thing had a smoothness to it that's hard to do with the limited format. Fantastic work!!