Dance of the Unsquared Circles
The trick is to find out what charges what
To lure the taste of chocolate
out of chocolate, add salt.
It’s not the old equation,
only a recipe for sensibility.
Opposites don’t attract, just end up
like the couple that set fire to civility
and chalked a faultline down the center
of possession. Or it’s the other way around —
two people wearing their anger inside out
for twenty years — all that electricity
trapped behind a flickering of false lives.
Call it cold fusion, or misery, or lightning
minus light. Call it whatever you like.
The trick is to find out what charges what —
to know the differences that revolve
in imaginary spaces —
Andromeda and The Milky Way
caught in a waltz of mutual gravity.
Let cardinals bring out the snow in snow.
Let the tree behind bullet-proof glass,
its leaves spindling toward sun,
make you crave an infinity of ocean.
If you want me to love you
write a graffiti of rain-slick roads
across the Sahara of my distance,
tattoo a dusting of particles
onto the terra incognita of my fear.
About the Creator
Lori Lamothe
Poet, Writer, Mom. Owner of two rescue huskies. Former baker who writes on books, true crime, culture and fiction.
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Comments (7)
fantastic. so many lines, elegant and simple but rich of experience and imagery. thank you for sharing and congrats!!
Awesome imagery.
This poem is stunning. Those first two lines lure the reader in with a promise of beautiful imagery and then you deliver all the way through.
Very well written!
I love this so much. Lots of really masterful imagery here. Great work :D
I really love poetry, and I really loved your poem a lot. I could feel your emotions in it. It was like you were writing my story in my past relationships. Congratulations. You truly deserved to win.
Hey Lori. This poem is a punch of reality and emotion. Peppered with words and lines that stir a gut and cause a head to nod, YES! You my dear friend have so much writing talent. I totally enjoy my reads. Congrats again winning this Vocal challenge and prize.💕