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Dance of the Unsquared Circles

The trick is to find out what charges what

By Lori LamothePublished 4 years ago 1 min read
Second Place in From Across the Room Challenge
Dance of the Unsquared Circles
Photo by Bryan Goff on Unsplash

To lure the taste of chocolate

out of chocolate, add salt.

It’s not the old equation,

only a recipe for sensibility.

Opposites don’t attract, just end up

like the couple that set fire to civility

and chalked a faultline down the center

of possession. Or it’s the other way around —

two people wearing their anger inside out

for twenty years — all that electricity

trapped behind a flickering of false lives.

Call it cold fusion, or misery, or lightning

minus light. Call it whatever you like.

The trick is to find out what charges what —

to know the differences that revolve

in imaginary spaces —

Andromeda and The Milky Way

caught in a waltz of mutual gravity.

Let cardinals bring out the snow in snow.

Let the tree behind bullet-proof glass,

its leaves spindling toward sun,

make you crave an infinity of ocean.

If you want me to love you

write a graffiti of rain-slick roads

across the Sahara of my distance,

tattoo a dusting of particles

onto the terra incognita of my fear.

love poems

About the Creator

Lori Lamothe

Poet, Writer, Mom. Owner of two rescue huskies. Former baker who writes on books, true crime, culture and fiction.

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  • N. S. Robbins4 years ago

    fantastic. so many lines, elegant and simple but rich of experience and imagery. thank you for sharing and congrats!!

  • John Edward4 years ago

    Awesome imagery.

  • Trish B4 years ago

    This poem is stunning. Those first two lines lure the reader in with a promise of beautiful imagery and then you deliver all the way through.

  • Hannah Oran4 years ago

    I love this so much. Lots of really masterful imagery here. Great work :D

  • Irene Mielke4 years ago

    I really love poetry, and I really loved your poem a lot. I could feel your emotions in it. It was like you were writing my story in my past relationships. Congratulations. You truly deserved to win.

  • Suzanne 4 years ago

    Hey Lori. This poem is a punch of reality and emotion. Peppered with words and lines that stir a gut and cause a head to nod, YES! You my dear friend have so much writing talent. I totally enjoy my reads. Congrats again winning this Vocal challenge and prize.💕

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