Poets logo

Creation

A surreal poem just for fun :)

By Alexander McEvoyPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
Creation
Photo by Dyu - Ha on Unsplash

All around is empty void,

The darkness left once thoughts lay destroyed.

Hanging there, without form in empty air

The dreamer plucks a shapeless seed.

Made of nothing, something deep inside yearns to be freed.

Taking a long and deep inhale,

the dreamer cups the thing so frail.

And breathes across its now gently golden skin

Lighting a secret fire deep within.

The tiny star in endless night, grows noticeably more bright.

Laughing aloud the dreamer gently blows again.

Words flow in rippling waves like from a gleaming golden pen.

One more breath drives the golden light away.

The spark of thought too frail to stay.

In anguish does the dreamer sway.

Lost again in darkness now made darker still

By the loss of the muse’s quill.

Gently then again their palm,

Driving away their aching qualms

The dreamer feel another patch of nothing.

With gentle fingers they take hold of that perfect nothing

And hold it softly before wide eyes

Cradling their darling prize

In cupped hands the spark appears

And the moment of creation nears.

A long slow breath to fan the flame

Coaxing life which from nothing came.

Words begin their dancing spin

Spooled out from the fire deep within

A golden orb now clutched fast

Its empty nothing now long past

High aloft the orb is thrown

With a technique that can never be shown

Or learn or taught

A lesson one must earn and must be self-taught

A pure and sacred moment of singular creation

The dreamer’s ultimate fixation

A story explodes to life

A twisting tale of epic kind

Torn from the nothing in their mind

Love and loss and grief and joy are rife

In the nothing brought to life

Surrounding the dreamer where once was void

A new creation to be destroyed

By march of time

Or its dying in its prime

Pen to paper

Brush to paint

Reality becomes so faint

As the dreamer binds and traps imaginations vapors

For FunStream of Consciousnesssurreal poetryFree Verse

About the Creator

Alexander McEvoy

Writing has been a hobby of mine for years, so I'm just thrilled to be here! As for me, I love writing, dogs, and travel (only 1 continent left! Australia-.-)

"The man of many series" - Donna Fox

I hope you enjoy my madness

AI is not real art!

Reader insights

Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

Top insights

  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

Add your insights

Comments (11)

Sign in to comment
  • Mark Ryan11 months ago

    A really nice poem feeling the creative process

  • Nicole Elmy11 months ago

    I appreciate the way that the words bind together in unexpected ways. I find myself rereading portions of the poem to fully digest the rich narrative.

  • Dana Crandell11 months ago

    A very enjoyable ride with your imagination! Well done!

  • Beautiful and haunting.

  • Help, from the fourth line till the end, I read the poem imagining you're talking about testicles. There is something seriously wrong with me. I belong at a mental asylum 😅😅 But I loved your poem hehehehe

  • Belle11 months ago

    I love this! It ebbs and flows so beautifully

  • Andrew C McDonald11 months ago

    Very deep and almost whimsically sad. A lovely take on creation. 🤗

  • Sean A.11 months ago

    A very imaginative take on the creation of art. Well done!

  • Komal11 months ago

    This is absolutely mesmerizing—a beautiful, almost mythical take on the act of creation itself.

  • Jasmine Aguilar11 months ago

    This poem radiates such a sense of wonder! Beautifully written!

  • L.I.E11 months ago

    Wow so surreal and vivid. Excellent writing.

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.