Could absence of something create comfort
everyone deserves comfort, only we look for it at wrong place for a long time
Could absence of something create comfort
Contradiction contraposition
Our universe unapologetically assert
A lull , a splitting chaos, a vibrating murmur
A deafening silence, a blazing thunder
Yes I felt all ,they replacement of a single
Yet very strong throbbing pulsating desire
A never giving up stubborn desire
So ever thankful to the absence of all
It awakened the humble place of my internal empire
Lighting the area of my heart's desire with a golden beam
what it is, what it could be
two parallel universes
It pinched me
I looked for the doors hiding between thee
I looked for the answers peeping between thee
the closed walls the closed doors
the tightening of possibilities
the widening of self-limiting beliefs
a beautiful silvery fountain of lively life
unaware untouched of absence
and its all projected discomfort
flourished nonetheless in an overlooked crevice
Formed to build a new festival,
grew alone into a new celebration
On that day my soul grew into a spectacle
As I craved more ,I drifted alone abandoned
Carrying the discomfort,the lonesome loneliness
At the end it all went well, I found comfort in my disoriented ugly looking hell
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