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Cosmic hinge

Dormant promises

By Sara CPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read

The world just tilted. Not a jolt,

But slow, deliberate, a bolt

Unfastened from a cosmic hinge.

The air, a sudden, subtle fringe

Of cold around the morning's heat.

My heart, a hushed, uncertain beat.

The pavement stretches, wet and dark,

A thin black ribbon, leaving mark

Of unseen turns, a whispered call.

And overhead, a hesitant fall

Of light through clouds, a muted gray.

No chance to turn, no other way.

The steering wheel feels strange and new,

Each curve a path I must pursue.

A phantom weight upon the gas,

A breath held tight as moments pass.

The engine idles, soft and deep,

While dormant promises now leap.

A landscape blurred, a whispered plea,

The edge of what I used to be.

This silent drop, this sudden lean,

The opening of an unseen scene.

The brakes released, a gentle sigh,

And now, only the forward sky.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Sara C

Don't you hate when you can't quite recall the word on the tip of your tongue, or when your thoughts get jumbled? Regular writing can help bridge the gap between your brain and mouth, making communication smoother and more confident.

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