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Corinthians

or, Visiting Nana

By Joey RoundsPublished 4 years ago 1 min read

You’re clueless to the mannerisms of

your jaw grinding to that

wet orchestra of dopamine and

the house couldn’t be cleaner

and I don’t know what to say

I sketch my little girl in pencil

I tell her to be still while

Nana floats over the linoleum and

the robot maid from The Jetsons

comes to mind

she cooks but you never see her eat

I begin to shade in her eyes

Those heavy paisley teardrops

two pools of maple syrup

“Never start with the eyes!” my art teacher used to say. That’s all I remembered from her class honestly, go figure.

I’m a quarter thru the sketch and

I see my sister

I see my mother

I see my wife in the sketch and

my mother says dinner is ready

her pupils are a void

devoid of light and she knows i know.

sad poetry

About the Creator

Joey Rounds

Ventura born, N.C. raised, In Reno is where i’m spending most of my days. Father, blue collar serf, pseudo-intellectual, big wave surfer (waves of depression). I wear a crucifix necklace, just in case I get stabbed at a 7-11 Redbox.

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  • El Poet3 years ago

    "WHOA!" Joey from Friends voice. You say so much, subtly. "You’re clueless to the mannerisms of your jaw grinding to that wet orchestra of dopamine..." I like this! Paisley tear drops, I know what you mean! Wink...Smile...Finger point... 2 thumbs up!

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