
You’re clueless to the mannerisms of
your jaw grinding to that
wet orchestra of dopamine and
the house couldn’t be cleaner
and I don’t know what to say
I sketch my little girl in pencil
I tell her to be still while
Nana floats over the linoleum and
the robot maid from The Jetsons
comes to mind
she cooks but you never see her eat
I begin to shade in her eyes
Those heavy paisley teardrops
two pools of maple syrup
“Never start with the eyes!” my art teacher used to say. That’s all I remembered from her class honestly, go figure.
I’m a quarter thru the sketch and
I see my sister
I see my mother
I see my wife in the sketch and
my mother says dinner is ready
her pupils are a void
devoid of light and she knows i know.
About the Creator
Joey Rounds
Ventura born, N.C. raised, In Reno is where i’m spending most of my days. Father, blue collar serf, pseudo-intellectual, big wave surfer (waves of depression). I wear a crucifix necklace, just in case I get stabbed at a 7-11 Redbox.
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Comments (1)
"WHOA!" Joey from Friends voice. You say so much, subtly. "You’re clueless to the mannerisms of your jaw grinding to that wet orchestra of dopamine..." I like this! Paisley tear drops, I know what you mean! Wink...Smile...Finger point... 2 thumbs up!