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Compromised Revenge

A little bit of a few poems smashed together.

By Silver DauxPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Compromised Revenge
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Revenge is a petty form of pleasure

Smoked by heathens and sad little men

Crippled by insulted honor.

.

It dusts dirt roads with invisible savagery,

Paints blue skies with

Childhood woes.

.

It tinges hot coffee with cold thoughts

And someone is screwed

Into drinking tepid sludge.

.

But compromise means I sit indoors

Watching the snow fall through each gap

In the screen.

.

You sip your whiskey and dream

Of cigarettes and sex

Because compromise and revenge are the same dish.

.

One is hot.

One is cold.

Neither tastes very good.

.

And when they combine,

There's nothing to do but vomit it up

And sneer at the mess.

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About the Creator

Silver Daux

Shadowed souls, cursed magic, poetry that tangles itself in your soul and yanks out the ugly darkness from within. Maybe there's something broken in me, but it's in you too.

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  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Wow! Can’t tell that anything was smashed together! Felt very cohesive from beginning to end.

  • Komalabout a year ago

    Haha, love the vibe—straight talk with a clever twist! Revenge and compromise as bad meals? Spot on. Great punchy lines, too!😉

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Hell yeah. This is so true. Well done, once again.

  • Kay Husnickabout a year ago

    Amazing work. Such a strong ending on this.

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Holy fuckballs. lol. This is outstanding. Also...I love smashing poems together. It's one of my favourite things when I have like three great poems that need a home. So I just smash the shit out of them lol. This is so damn amazing though. Honestly. I should just copy and paste the whole damn thing and highlight it here as my favourite lines. But - this opening Made me grin a little actually and feel angry at the same time "Revenge is a petty form of pleasure Smoked by heathens and sad little men Crippled by insulted honor." and this ending just landed so bloody well. Bravo bravo bravo "Because compromise and revenge are the same dish. . One is hot. One is cold. Neither tastes very good. . And when they combine, There's nothing to do but vomit it up And sneer at the mess."

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