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Commuter Life

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By Paul FeyPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
Night Train #14, Philippe Saucourt (2016)

In Manhattan today it’s gray and

from afar I can sense your grayness

too; in stale morning and afternoons

you spend alone. I think about what I’m doing

to you, sometimes. I leave you at the edge

of the bed with a good-day kiss, half

sleeping, both of us on our ways.

Two hours is nowhere

near enough recreational time. Such is a commuter life

and of a currently pregnant, staying at home

wife. Two minutes of alternating leg stretches

is just shy eternal discomfort. Relativity.

This one thing I know is mediocre

poetry from my bloated artist ego, aka

“Copywrite,” isn’t enough to say I’m

thinking of you, near-always. So I will

supplement it with dishes washed,

muscles rubbed and something I pick

up from Grand Central or the corner store.

So that even when I’m away,

on each leg, these long stretches,

you can feel the lengths of my commuter love.

love poems

About the Creator

Paul Fey

I just want to be the best writer you know.

https://paulfeywritings.cargo.site/

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