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Commotion

๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”

By แ”•แ—ฉแ—ฐ แ•ผแ—ฉแ–‡TYPublished about a year ago โ€ข 1 min read

No method in my motion

aimlessly drifting

my life, only

chaos and commotion.

when you left

I lost my north star

my path is askew

I am dying inside

and I don't know

what to do.

The nights are the worst

I lie in my bed

grasping my pillow

stroking it as if it

were your head

all

tangled in sheets

that should be our

hands and feet

just praying I'll

dream of us

once it becomes dusk.

It seems at night

time goes by fast

dreams of us together

never seems to last.

before you know it

the day starts and then

I begin to miss you

all over again.

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About the Creator

แ”•แ—ฉแ—ฐ แ•ผแ—ฉแ–‡TY

Sam Harty is a poet of raw truth and quiet rebellion. Author of Lost Love Volumes I & II and The Lost Little Series, her work confronts heartbreak, trauma, and survival with fierce honesty and lyrical depth. Where to find me

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  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Beautiful and something we all have gone through perhaps, but so very sad.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is beautiful, and a little sad.

  • Lightning Bolt โšกabout a year ago

    โšกโค๏ธโšก

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    Amazing lines!

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Let's not let the commotion of life affect us! Heartfelt.

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