Commitment to the Sky
- Confessions of a reef
I came from the bottom of the sea
honed and struggled
regardless of being torn to pieces by the waves
but desperately pulled myself up high
which is an eternal commitment to the sky
About the Creator
Dawnxisoul393art
Dawnxisoul393art, an illustrator and designer couple living on a remote island in Hong Kong. Listen to the sea's vows and look at the persistent blue sky. Waves and white sails, blue sky and white clouds. The landscape and canvas ahead.
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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That's outstanding , filled with nature
Oh wow, that’s an impressive piece of art!