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80,000 tears

By Birdy RainPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Photo by Andrew Hara, Mauna Kea Hawai'i

shrinking sure but pale

like a veiled and jilted bride

she cedes to the West

Haikuheartbreak

About the Creator

Birdy Rain

They always said I talked too much and so I began to write. I can be found on Big Island (Hawai'i) talking to cats, making chocolate, or "working on my book."

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  • PK Colleranabout a year ago

    Beautiful haiku. Remarkable photo too. 💙

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