
The moment you gave in
I felt your love crashing into me
The way it made me feel inside
The only word is ecstasy
The moment you gave in to love & desire
Your body decided to show me what I mean to you
Your kiss is addictive, your tongue like silk & is more divine
Then anything I can describe
The way your body moved like a dream, every part of you on display for me
Took my breath & thoughts away
The feeling I could see
Was flowing through you oh so sweet
Your nipples hardened
Then your thighs
As the thought of what’s to come
The moment you gave in
You grabbed my hair to make it clear
The sweet honey that tastes like summer rain that drips between your legs
Was what you wanted to provide
You wanted it right then
To let a slick hard tongue tease & stroke
To Make that honey flow
You pushed me down & jumped on the tongue that’s just for you
You pushed my tongue as deep inside
With the weight of your body & strength of your thighs
You knew the feeling it gave to me
Would make give me pleasure only you can provide
You let yourself go with such abondon
That when the honey started to flow
A honey river flowed right down my throat
You shivered with pleasure
You screamed your finish to the ceiling
As I sucked your honey & licked it out
You lost your breath & grabbed my hair
Telling me you were ready for more.
In your eyes it was clear to me
Your love for me was oh so pure
Your honesty in your eyes
Was one I rarely see as you guard it all away from harm
But when you let me in you are suddenly so aware
The only harm that will come to you
Is a sensational overload.
About the Creator
Ellysa Greenhalgh
I am a writer from south east Melbourne. I write poetry mainly, I love to be descriptive in my writing. I write about true experiences, erotic, love, relationships, mental health & life.
I hope you enjoy what I write, feedback is welcome.



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