Collapsed Starheart
Meditation on a heart that collapses inward—and keeps its own light.

Collapsed Starheart
Last night, the sky folded inward
like an apology learning its grammar.
Somewhere above the roofs,
a bright certainty failed politely,
became gravity with a memory.
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I felt it here—behind the ribs—
a sudden quiet that pulled
every loose thing inward:
Old promises, ticket stubs,
The teaspoon you left in the sugar.
¤
People think collapse is loud.
Mostly it’s housekeeping:
light turning to weight,
wishes to orbits,
noise to a hum you can’t misplace.
¤
I walk the block slower,
keys on their small ellipse,
breath falling back to itself.
Even the traffic lights obey:
green, red, red again—
a lesson in staying.
¤
What Blaze learns is patience.
What was shouted becomes the center.
I name the pull without blaming it,
cup the dark like warm water,
let it hold what I can’t.
¤
Later, I angle a mirror at my chest
and watch my pulse lens the room—
edges bend, letters soften,
Your photograph curves
toward the mouth of the moment.
¤
Not all collapsing breaks.
Some of it forgives the scatter,
gathers the far into close,
the loud into true.
¤
By dawn, I’m smaller and denser,
but not gone. Spark survives as law,
as a steady tug back to the core.
I step into the morning with pockets full of hush,
a private constellation intact—
not shining everywhere,
but enough.
About the Creator
Milan Milic
Hi, I’m Milan. I write about love, fear, money, and everything in between — wherever inspiration goes. My brain doesn’t stick to one genre.
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