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Here are the words, nervous about meaning
As little as the mute mote in the beam
Here is the dust, beautifully gleaming
Waltzing through a silent, gaseous dream

Disturbance is order’s only author
Gravity presses matter for ideas
Everything aches to be worth the bother
Nothing becomes something, asks what free is

Protostars coalesce, syllables stare
At one another until one ignites
Fusion turns its puzzled look to a glare
A main sequence in fine balance delights

Suns are dust that intimacy refines
Clusters of stars become legible lines
About the Creator
D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.



Comments (3)
I have made a recommendation of your story in this week's Raise Your Voice here https://shopping-feedback.today/resources/raise-your-voice-thread-12-04-2025%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
Wonderful universal concept poem to reflect the turmoil within us
"Disturbance is order’s only author Gravity presses matter for ideas" Those were my favourite lines. Loved your beautiful poem!