The snowflakes fall from a pale grayish sky
I remember your smile and forget to cry
Your hands were like heaven when they touched my mind (set)
How would I know that you would leave me behind?
"Not all is lost" is what they still say
But it sure as hell was all lost that day
Sure was not what I was hoping for
But you were busy coping, sore
Would I turn back time if I could?
Probably, if the ending might change.
But hurt stories are a dozen for a dime
Grand people get hurt by unintentions all the time
Country songs are full of hurt and sad
When you're the subject, it's bad
But there's always tomorrow
Unless you listen to Garth Brooks sing
" If tomorrow never comes"'
About the Creator
Esther the Poet
I love to write, doesn't matter what, as long as I can use it to touch your heart and mind too. They call it "feels", and that's where I'm at and what I'm all about. This is a nicer platform than Simily..
:) Hope you like it.
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Comments (2)
"But it sure as hell was all lost that day" - the emotion in this line ❤️💔 Thanks for sharing this, Esther~
Wow...😮 this is sooo relatable, Esther. Are we related lolol although I like some country music (not all) and I do like Garth Brooks 😊sorry not sorry 😬🤣