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Cold

Huddling together

By Matthew DanielsPublished 3 years ago โ€ข 1 min read
Cold
Photo by Federico Bottos on Unsplash

Slows time to a scrawl

Drawing closer by degrees

Hour hand is trembling

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Matthew Daniels

Merry meet!

I'm here to explore the natures of stories and the people who tell them.

My latest book is Interstitches: Worlds Sewn Together. Check it out: https://www.engenbooks.com/product-page/interstitches-worlds-sewn-together

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  • Test3 years ago

    Matthew, I love the personification of time in that final line! This was short a sweet but really captured the feeling I have when I'm cold, the time slowing down and the wish for myself to hurry up and warm up! Nice work!

  • Joshua Gonzalez3 years ago

    Love the last line, the hour hand slow and trembling in the cold.

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