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Coaster Under Glass

Senryu, Matthew Fromm's 5-7-5

By Andrea Corwin Published 2 years ago 1 min read
Coaster Under Glass
Photo by Monika Grabkowska on Unsplash

Coaster under glass

catches sliding sweat droplets

from icy goblets

An entry for a creative, fun challenge of picking a random, mundane object and writing a poem about it in the 5-7-5 format.

For FunSenryu

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Andrea Corwin

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  • Laurie Meyer2 years ago

    Living here in Florida I’ve spent many lazy afternoons watching idly as icy pearls of condensation slide down my glass…Great job Andrea!

  • Christy Munson2 years ago

    loved your use of the term goblets - never hear that word enough these days

  • Mika Oka2 years ago

    Everything can be so inspiring even the coaster

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    Love the rhyme you incorporated! Very clever and fun to read!

  • Oh wow, thanks so much Paul!!

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    Oh this is lovely...I think because...it conjures up a fair few different images...different stories could be derived from just those three eloquent lines. the rhyming is brilliant and in my head I'm now thinking is it first date sweat nerves or maybe serious conversation sweat nerves or maybe it's a business pitch situation...see...I'm now digging into the backstory lol based on just three lines - nicely done, Andrea!

  • Murali2 years ago

    I enjoyed your story.

  • Oooo, this was fantastic! Loved it so much!

  • Loved it

  • Katie Erdman2 years ago

    I love this!

  • John Cox2 years ago

    Lovely!

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