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Clone

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By Kay HusnickPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - November 2024
Clone
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Make me out to be something I'm not,

a clone to live in your head with malicious intent.

Shape her around assumptions and lies, the kind I've never told,

so she wishes you harm as I wish you well,

a silent harmony you will never hear.

Teach her to mimic all your hate-fueled self-talk

until you let yourself believe it came from me in the first place.

Let her convince you of the worst,

and I will never be able to change your mind.

You pushed me off a pedestal and branded me a villain,

positions I never asked for either way.

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Kay Husnick

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  • mureed hussainabout a year ago

    A raw and honest portrayal of the destructive power of false narratives. Your words are a stark reminder of the importance of empathy and understanding. The line 'Teach her to mimic all your hate-fueled self-talk' is particularly haunting. It's a powerful image of the destructive power of negativity.

  • Cindy🎀about a year ago

    The way you express the pain of being seen as something you're not is so powerful. Great work Kay!✨

  • Andrew C McDonaldabout a year ago

    Great treatise on how we are labelled with tags we didn’t earn or deserve. Such a depth of feeling there. Great job. Congratulations on TS,

  • Marvelous Michaelabout a year ago

    Beautiful indeed! U are amazing

  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Such a powerful voice in this one. Love it ♥️

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Your poem is dynamically impactful and creative. Congratulations, too, on the Top Story - it's so well-deserved.

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Oooh this hits home! Great job!

  • Anu's Quillabout a year ago

    Beautifully written👏

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  • Megabout a year ago

    This is such a great piece! I love the use of the clone metaphor. Definitely subscribing :)

  • Poppy about a year ago

    'You pushed me off a pedestal and branded me a villain' is such an impactful line!

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