Circle of Fire
The Last Flame Challenge
Like wilted leaves
The cycle continues
In a race against time
Fall turns into winter
Many beginnings
Turn into endings
With each passing year
Leaves everything pending
The wonder of hope
Leading to dreams ever lasting
But the clue is in divine wisdom of the seasons
That nothing lasts forever
Just like the plants of Spring
Our bodies start to fade
And like the beautiful rose of Summer
We are not beautiful anymore
And like the brown crumbled leaves of Fall
Our bodies hear the call
That the ice fairies will inevitably be dancing with our souls
The fire of life will be with us no more
The flame of what you leave behind
Is your Legacy
About the Creator
Susan Payton
I love to write in every venue. I am 75 years old and try to make every day count,. I am learning a great deal about poetry on Vocal, and I am glad to be here.
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Comments (4)
So gentle and serene
This line hit me,The flame of what you leave behind is your legacy. A powerful reminder of what truly matters.
What a creative way to express a life cycle.
The flame of love. The knowledge that nothing truly ends. The certainty that the little one is alive. Be sure of it. It doesn’t end. Don’t be afraid. When I was little, I used to leave my body. Do you know how wonderful it is up there? Keep the candle lit, and your child is beside you. It doesn’t end, I tell you. God loves you. You will see. :))