it's raining again
beyond my control
variational seasonal indulgences
it’s just the weather
but later
wet to the soul
completely drenched
variations are fluctuating
woven patterns wave
winter side an open ride
upon the foam of the brave
home an upmarket cave
and every dollar you save
just makes you less brave
less than impressive
more in the message
and it's raining again
get ya wet weather dress
don’t make erratic assumptions
prevent predated reloading
prepare prelocated functions
if it wasn't for the bevvies
there'd still bet howls
baying of the uncontented
sober and angry
it’s still fucking raining again
great, they’d be wet as well
a hole in the ceiling
completed transparency
hydration problems
we know it’s raining again
and issues
emanating from the heavens
and a great number of
roofing problems
we’ll take a look
when the rain stops
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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We'll take a look when the rain stops. I loved that line! So much hope there!