Cancer sticks being smoked one after the other
Hacking dry cough wracking her small petit frame
Acrid blue smoke clouds an enclosed windowless room
Irritating invisible fumes clog up all the sinuses
Noxious odorous smells permeating throughout the clothing
Smoking the cigarette down all the way to the short filter
Mood swings control her attitude when she is out of cigarettes
Oh, how she wishes she could quit smoking these nasty things
Kicking the habit is the hardest thing she's ever tried to do
Everyone is full of advice on how to best quit smoking
Raspy voice asking for another light.
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Addiction is seriously so detrimental and never easy to come out of!