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Castles in the Sky

POV of the other

By Jennidoll of (jennidoll.inc)Published 17 days ago 1 min read
Castles in the Sky
Photo by Tomás Mendes on Unsplash

Dancing in a daydream,

Castles in the sky,

Wondering things about you,

Oceans in your eyes

Sunset on the ocean,

Orange crimson hue,

Picture perfect visions,

Wishes do come true

Making starlight wishes,

Watching falling stars,

Girl your blessed by Venus,

You have fire just like Mars

Fire in your eyes,

A siren when you speak,

Holding back these thoughts of you,

Is making me feel weak

Beautiful darkness,

Shadow and light,

Hiding these feelings,

Losing the fight

Wanting to see you,

Touch you and feel you,

Wanting to hear you,

Say that it’s true

Eyes of a stranger,

Say what you feel,

Show me that this,

Daydream is real

Writing in a metaphor,

Candy coded clues,

Truth in hidden poetry,

Poetic Point of View

Free VerseStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Jennidoll of (jennidoll.inc)

I am a writer, photographer, and a storyteller. I gain inspiration from the haunted and the beautiful, and the mysterious 'in between'. Music is my Muse and so are all of you. Everyone is a character in my story. Welcome to my storyland.

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