
“I used to be Snow White, but I drifted.” -- Mae West

The quest for purity is folly pure
We are born wailing in blood and feces
For being human, there is no real cure
From an emperor’s fart to a nun’s sneeze

The evidence of imperfection flows
The innocent heart is oblivious
The clean mind, absolutely nothing knows
Naïve tongues make their folly obvious

If all who are impure must be condemned
Then not a soul will escape destruction
Inquisitors’ robes may be brightly gemmed
But their hidden stains supply instruction

Sneering castigation of the impure
For hypocrites, has beguiling allure
About the Creator
D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.
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Whoaaaa, this was soooo deep and held so much truth!
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Well written sonnet. So deep!
Well crafted and excellent nonnet