Carpet Baggers
Sky-Ku
Psychedelic rug
Nature’s Autumnal carpet
Daily refurbished
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I know this doesn’t seem to fit the challenge, but the falling leaves deiftimg down to refurbish the carpet … … You be the judge.😎
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp
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Comments (3)
Oooo, that second line, that was so clever! Loved your Haiku!
I love the autumn vibes 🧡
Hi Andrew! My insights finally work. The weren't working on my iPhone - has been going on for months. Pleading with Vocal. So jumped on the iPad and ta da. I get to use with you! As a judge? Absolutely! It reminds of Autumn in Adelaide South Australia where I lived for 7 years. Memories of ‘Psychedelic rug, Pauline 🌸 I’ve written a new ‘Sky-ku.’ I would love you to read … https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/disoriented-fb39950nin%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">