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Bus stop revisited

Thoughts on a draughty shelter

By Raymond G. TaylorPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
Bus stop route 367 Elmers End Tesco, SE London, night, April 2025. Photo: RGT

Dry and inviting

You welcome me

Like a friendly embrace

Come hither you say

Let’s share a draught or two

Though draughty you may be

I will be doing the drinking

And thinking

How much like the old days this is

When I used to be a

Bus stop boozer

For ten minutes I enjoy this reverie

As I see the world through subdued colours

Night time muted shades

Sipping nay gulping my bottle of

Dragon Jamaican stout

Waiting for the 367 to turn up and save me

The trouble of walking all the way

Home

humor

About the Creator

Raymond G. Taylor

Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran8 months ago

    Oooo, that sounds like a cool name for a stout. Loved your poem!

  • Mark Graham8 months ago

    Good one. I think there are bus stops that could give writers a lot of food for thought in many ways and not just for a ride or a rest or a drink or so but for meeting all kinds of people and stories.

  • Ah, warm memories of "draughty" haunts.

  • Luna8 months ago

    Unique perspective

  • Kendall Defoe 8 months ago

    Why does this sound like a song the Jam should have written? 🍺

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