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Burnt my tongue on acid spittle

Yeah...poem, right?

By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Burnt my tongue on acid spittle
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burnt my tongue

on acid spittle

felt the torque

slam me a little

Scratched lung

inhaled brittle

Rich man bung

Legal acquittal

Song is sung

full rebuttal

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Author's Notes: Another that...well...you know.

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Kayleigh Fraser ✨2 years ago

    I love this! There are a million interpretations running around my brain at once 😁 I love love love when that happens! Seriously brilliant use of language. This blows my mind that’s it’s only 26 words. Well done!

  • JBaz2 years ago

    This was witty or maybe it is the mood I’m on today but I really connected with this Brilliant Paul,

  • This felt like a funeral to me. I'm so sorry if I am wayyyyy off 😅

  • Yeah, we get it, lol. Still fun.

  • Mackenzie Davis2 years ago

    Oooh, I sense the cleverness in these lines...Poison, perhaps? Medical condition? Perhaps something...untoward...thrown in? ("Rich man bung | Legal acquittal") You're playing with abstract poetry today and it's very fun to experience, pal. ;)

  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    Very clever...now go see a doctor!

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