Build Something First

Verse 1
They talk like they’ve climbed every hill
But they’ve never laid a single brick still
Throwing shade from a seat they never earned
But I’ve got scars from the lessons I learned
Pre-Chorus
I’ve built with broken hands and grit
So I don’t need advice from someone who quit
Chorus
Don’t take constructive criticism
From folks who haven’t constructed shit
If you ain’t bled for it, sweat for it
Then your words don’t mean a bit
I’ve built my truth from fire and fight
So keep your judgment outta sight
Don’t take constructive criticism
From folks who haven’t constructed shit
Verse 2
They love to point out every flaw
But never stood where I saw it all
Blueprints drawn in midnight tears
Foundations laid through doubt and fear
Bridge
So if you’ve never risked the fall
Don’t tell me how to stand tall
I’ll take feedback from the brave
Not the ones who just behave
Final Chorus
Don’t take constructive criticism
From folks who haven’t constructed shit
If you ain’t built it, lived it, lost it
Then your voice don’t make me quit
I’ve earned my place, I’ve paid the price
So I’ll take truth, not empty advice
Don’t take constructive criticism
From folks who haven’t constructed shit
About the Creator
Julie O'Hara - Author, Poet and Spiritual Warrior
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