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Brown Fish

(or sometimes known as gut snakes)

By BrenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

i have a special room at my house

it's very small and quiet

it has a white bowl in the middle

full of little brown fish

they have no eyes or ears

no fins or flippers either

i imagine they stare at me

...they have no eyes!

no lips no tongues

no telling brown fish lies

with no current

or offshore breezes

they just float

and occasionally

they bob up and down

two thirds under the surface

like effluent icebergs

bobbing away in brown fish town

they have a disgusting cloying smell

a vapour like stench that lingers

touch them at your own peril

in case you pierce them with your fingers

they are extremely fragile

which makes them soft to touch

they just want to be hugged

and they want it oh so much

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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