Brick Wall
your impossible

The circles we've been tracing
around this place, are frustrating
these same traps, we keep falling in
Deja Vu of something
we should have faced long ago
the truth is we’re breaking.
You're a brick wall, and
I'm tired of banging my fist
against this same fight again
this same song, we've sung
this same melody, we've played
this soundtrack, we’ve worn out.
You're a Brick wall, and
I'm a ghost in this house
you couldn't see me
if I was a mouse
running across your toes
truth is I can't see you, either
we're both lost
You're a brick wall, and
this is the same dance
spinning round again
there's nothing new left
I never lead, you never follow
our love used to be full
but now we're just hollow
whoever said,
love was forever?
was never very clever.
You're a Brick wall, and
I'm tired of stubbing my toe
we'd both be better off
standing naked in the snow
there’s really nothing left
for us to say,
that hasn’t already been said.
You're a Brick Wall, and
we keep listening
to the sound of a
wind
we’ve both heard blowing
a thousand times.
You're a Brick wall, and
I've been counting
each one
just like the last one
they’re always the same
in this repeating game.
You're a brick wall, and
we’re both getting crushed
from the weight of it all.
why did we rush?
why did we think
we couldn't fall?
Your a brick wall, and
I keep asking how many times
can we say the same things
before we admit, this
was a mistake
or take a drive
together
to jump in a lake
You're a brick wall, and...
About the Creator
The Invisible Writer
Life goals - vacation always- work never
Creator of unreadable stories
Writer of bad poetry




Comments (1)
This was a heartbreaking and relatable piece for me Will! The repetitive language really lended to the overall impact of the piece, that melancholic feeling of knowing something isn't working and things need to change. Very well written! Good work!