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BRIANNA II

"The Registrar of Death"

By Tony BacaPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read

Captivating and statuesque

Born of darkness and deception

Piercing eyes like fiery crystals

Searing in your direction

.

Devouring any resistance

To protect your fertile soul

Sadness, sorrow, and misery

Of which she will bestow

.

Sweet venomous elixir

Drips from her forked tongue

Submerged in sheer temptation

Victims old and young

.

Her long hair flows and sways

Like that of flickering flames

Shimmering translucent flesh

In search of your remains

.

Restless crimson talons

Grasping at your soul

Locked within her clutches

Agony without console

.

Pandemic fears and pestilence

upon her as she slithers

In search of all destruction

Anguish she’ll deliver

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Cold and calculated

A voice surely sadistic

Deceitfulness within her smile

Divinely ritualistic

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Despite her wicked nature

There lies a true allure

Both fear and fascination

Her wrath is not demure

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Those of who have fallen

Or ventured in her path

Sinister and malevolence

Precedes the aftermath

.

Uttering her name aloud

Stokes the flames of Hell

Fueling all perversions

Her desires will not quell

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Helplessly in disbelief

You cling to your last breath

In the presence of Brianna

The Registrar of Death.

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About the Creator

Tony Baca

Just gathering inspiration along the way in this thing we call "Life." I prefer to write about the trials and tribulations of societal issues, but will immerse myself in a few other genres as well. Please drop by and say Hello! Cheers..

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  • S.J. Frederick2 years ago

    Very powerful. I really like this one.

  • Marina Hernandez2 years ago

    I Love poem.. use of your Vocabulary and how you placed the words

  • Lynda Spargur2 years ago

    The more I read this, the more I love it!

  • Good job

  • I really like the vocabulary you chose here, and where you placed them. Great work!

  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    wow, this is truly an amazing work of art. I love it.

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