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Breaking Branches

Even the things that appear to be Strong Breaks Breathlessly...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Breaking Branches
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Bountiful Beauty

Breaks Before

Branches Breach Balance,

Brittle Brown Branches...

Beginning Bold

But Breaking

Badly!

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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  • Roy Stevens3 years ago

    Clever work Lonzo!

  • Great job Lonzo

  • You nailed this! You did such a great job!

  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    Great Job 👍

  • Lamar Wiggins3 years ago

    Wow! You did the B proud!

  • C. H. Richard3 years ago

    Beautiful ♥️ Similiar to life. We will break if we don't find balance.❤️

  • Leslie Writes3 years ago

    Well done metaphor. Great piece!

  • I have to admit, I like the sound of breaking branches when I'm preparing them as kindling for the fire. Not so much when they're still attached to the tree. Highly evocative for me.

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Very nicely done.

  • Quincy.V3 years ago

    poetic skill and depth 💓💗💖 it.............

  • Evocative metaphor. Well done!

  • Dana Crandell3 years ago

    There's a lot "between the lines" on this one. Great job!

  • Robbie Cheadle3 years ago

    Nicely done.

  • Kristen Balyeat3 years ago

    Love the depths of this message. Great work!

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