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“Breaking A Good Woman’s Heart Should Be A Sin”

Christopher’s Deadly Sin

By PoeticallyPurple24Published 4 years ago 3 min read
“Breaking A Good Woman’s Heart Should Be A Sin”
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You were everything I ever wanted in a man.

Anyone that could fill this missing void I knew you can ,

At least I thought ,

Now I’m left feeling distraught .

Tears fill my eyes ,

feel like acid burning from my insides .

I gave you the rules to not make me catch feelings.

But you broke them with your wrongful dealings.

You said you care and love all your friends the same.

But that’s a lying ass game.

You don’t fuck your friends,you don’t cuddle them,you don’t make them feel appreciated and protected.

Then they tell you how they feel ,and they’re instantly rejected.

I’ve had fwbs and friends and we know where to draw the line that’s a fact .

We know the rules and and how to act.

And you’re 34 acting like that?

We don’t concede things to get this far.

That’s what friends do we know who we are…

You get upset because I’ve called you out on a game that you thought you knew.

I guess you thought I was a dumb weak woman too.

You tried to come at me like this strong Virgo .

But little do you actually know.

You let the one woman who actually fought for her love .

Just for you to let her go,like a weddings day dove .

Your words are like a strained pain from a heart attack .

I just want you to feel the hurt back .

Like a rape victims asshole being sodomized .

You ruptured it down to the core.

But you keep hurting me even more ?

It’s almost like you were never satisfied with your score.

You said I’m sorry that I don’t feel the same way you do.

So why the fuck are you doing the actions that make you’re feelings true .

But you made sure you did everything to make sure I caught feelings for you

While you make me give you real love but your artificial love was never true .

You’ve confessed that you’ve did this to women in the past .

And this is why nobody wants your sorry ass.

Nobody wants you to make them feel special just to drag their heart in peasant dirt .

And that shit fucking hurt .

Is this all I’m worth from you ?

A heart full of blue .

You grip my heart while blood is streaming down your skin.

Heartbreak should be your deadly sin.

You’re not a fucking king Virgo.

So quit acting like you’re worth a great show.

You want have to feel wanted to feel whole.

Every man wants a glimpse of control.

But it should never be given to a man with a heart of pure coal.

I thought you were a man worthy of praise but I’ll never exhort.

The way you whine for attention makes me wonder why you don’t wear a skirt .

You beg for validation from sex,but yours could never compete with my next.

You call yourself a man trying to make me look dumb,but you don’t even know how to make me cum.

I could degrade you like a real piece of scum.

Just because I’m so heart broken ,I’m completely numb.

Sitting in the freezing cold crying like a homeless bum.

And I use to think you were a great guy that was over looked.

Now I see who you really are I’m shucked.

No one wants to be treated this way and you know that.

But you’re mad because I’m the one that I knocked you off track .

And the others couldn’t so they took a step back .

I don’t understand was I not worthy of your love,

But you’re nosey enough to ask who else cock is giving this pussy a shove ?

I could write a 1000 hate poems for men like you .

But I will not .

However I know telling you the facts because it’s something I had to do .

I hope you come out of your ways and quit being this way .

I know it’s sure is hell it will not be today .

It sucks that it was clear as can be.

That you didn’t want to be with me .

But I kept on fighting for a man that just wanted his cum flee .

The one piece of good ass waiting patiently for you.

Had her so stuck to you like glue.

You shattered a good woman’s heart .

Puncturing her heart with darts.

While you wear a negligent grin.

This is the works of christopher’s deadly sin.

sad poetry

About the Creator

PoeticallyPurple24

I’m told I have a natural gift so let’s see how meaningful it really is !🥰

I used writing as a coping mechanism to get me through hardships in life .My goal is to become a poet that will change the world .I hope you can see my gift shine .

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