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Breakfast

A breakfast in an IHOP.

By Silver DauxPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Breakfast
Photo by Dani Rendina on Unsplash

Incense set my living room on fire

But I was busy looking into the coffee,

Remembering that one day

When my heart broke over pancakes.

.

It wasn't the din of the dishes clattering

In the kitchen behind our booth

Or the strange, wafting smell of the amalgamation

Of all the other breakfasts bothering me.

.

I was agitated by the scrape of a too-nice shirt

On skin used to broken-in, second-hand clothes.

The strawberries were drenched in red syrup.

And you were sitting there, flirting with the waitress.

.

Because my talk had bored you.

My ten seconds of fame were ten too many.

It was a silly little command too.

Tell me more about it.

.

Doesn't that mean that I can speak?

Isn't that the green light go of conversation?

I told the moon about you the night before.

And there I was, telling a stupid story.

.

Should have known.

From the dusty, untouched bookshelf

To the bad bourbon and the messy floors.

I was a practice run.

.

Maybe for the waitress or her sister or friend

Or some absolute stranger in my universe

With the same brown hair and dull grey-blue eyes

That made me such a perfect test.

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About the Creator

Silver Daux

Shadowed souls, cursed magic, poetry that tangles itself in your soul and yanks out the ugly darkness from within. Maybe there's something broken in me, but it's in you too.

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  • Carol Dauxabout a year ago

    made me cry...

  • Test3 years ago

    So sad and evocative. Beautifully done, Silver Serpent 💕🙂

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