Pulsing through the earth, twisting around life and death
Emerging dull and lifeless to a fool
You cut through the heavens, breaking up soft light
Crowding the view with your imposturous song
No one hears you in this barren time
Cragged like an elderly monster who insists on living
Birds pass by you, just like all the children after school
Like broken bones, you are useless in your form
If the storm was strong enough it would take you down
It's wrath embellishes in battering lifeless posers
When the sun warms, your blood surges upward
You begin to bloom, laughing at the unseasoned mind
About the Creator
ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)
~ American feminist living in Sweden ~ SHE/HER
Admin. Vocal Social Society
Find me: @andreapolla63.bsky.social
Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions


Comments (3)
I just love it! The way you think and perceive the world is breathtaking. This is an emotional, sensual, and powerful piece! Thank you for sharing yourself through your writing. What a gift!
I really enjoyed this!
I am craving feedback; any response appreciated. Thank you, ROCK