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Blue Half

A poem

By Moon DesertPublished 3 years ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
Photo by Juairia Islam Shefa on Unsplash

I only liked him half

The one where he was not stuck

To his own old obsolete beliefs

His open-minded attitude

Could win him millions

But if we need to get to the bottom of it

The duality of his personality

Multilingual

It is not always advisable

For a nationalist, patriot

Seeing only their own country

Everywhere

From colleagues to managers

At work

There is no one else

More valued in their world

So soon I was done

Like half a lonely half a sad boat

In the middle of the river

Only picked up

When my targets also coincided

With his goals

When I didn’t have to translate

What’s the best

What is my usual

Dipping in the subject

Because his answer

Was always the same:

“My country is the best!”

Even a vacation abroad

Had to match the tips from

His female compatriots

As tour guides

So why did he dare to hassle me?

Trying to change

My habits, familiar basics

Becoming a cool customer

Although without strengthening

Vision of his world

*

September 2022

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Thank you for reading!

heartbreak

About the Creator

Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

Unsplash

Crime Fiction: Love

Poetry: Friend

Psychology: Salvation

Where the wild roses grow full of words...

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