The blue in her eyes
Always as blue as the skies
Wet blue when she cries.
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Joe Patterson
Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.
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A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of us… my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the day’s oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along — apace with a sloth — has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶3 days ago in Petlife
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Beautifully simple and heartfelt. I love how each line deepens the shade of emotion. 💙
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Nice words
Amazing!!
Beautiful 💙
Very lovely and full of emotion. I appreciate that you made all three lines rhyme as well. It really worked for this piece. Great job :)
Very nice! :)
Very nice.
Oh, this is lovely, emotional, and powerful; well done!