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lilac blue and free
Iβm watching you fly freely
Craving your life ways
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Jay,when I write
Hello.
What?
23, Black, queer, yup
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I love birds so of course I had to click this one. Look at that shade of blue π I am trying to get a close up of a robin, not had any luck yet butβ¦ I suppose whenever I do it will show up somewhere here on Vocal. The feeling of being trapped would make anyone want the life of a bird, I loved your haiku, it makes me wish I could fly. I love the contemplated touch, and how you chose the haiku for it, a single moment in time but that everyone can relate to. Outstanding ππ½ππ½β₯οΈ
Love this haiku!!!!