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Blue

A poetic response to a dream

By Shannon LoewenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Blue
Photo by Ion Fet on Unsplash

You showed up again

Your eyes were blue

I knew it wasn’t you

But even so

You were excited at the notion of seeing me later

And that excitement caught on my ragged heart

A faltering, flittering warmth from a lifetime ago

But it still wasn’t you

Cuz your eyes were blue

~S.L.

sad poetry

About the Creator

Shannon Loewen

Hi there :) I use poetry as a processing tool and only recently began to share my works. Thank you for reading them <3

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