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Bleeding mountain

Haiku

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Harry (not my art)

bleeding mountain, me

Creeping pain in our embrace

I crumble with you

surreal poetrysad poetry

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Test3 years ago

    LOVE this one. So unique. You got this haiku thing sorted, Melissa!

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