You so bland
Saying the same thing over and over again
Leaving all your thoughts in your head
Confused about something you just read
Of course every piece is deep
They all have strong emotions
Most of them will have a powerful tone
It’s Poetry! That’s what most of them should be.
Yes majority are lovely and beautiful
They can be very detailed and vivid
Most do paint a good picture in your mind
It’s poetry! So sis please come up with another line
They all pack a strong emotion
Some will make you sad , their tag will tell you that
Others will make you smile
Personal stories are written in all, so shared experiences will always be involved
You will relate to them all
It’s poetry! Put your repetitive comments on pauses
Think deeper, you are not a spam robot
Even the AI comments is putting you to shame
It doesn’t even have human pain
Stop cheating reading other people’s comments to figure out what you going say
Afraid to type the wrong meaning, so you start re-reading, and erasing the comment you should have posted anyway
You do realize this is not a discussion board for a grade?
Do you think other people on here think this way?
About the Creator
L.I.E
Hey, I'm Emily! Thanks for reading. Hope you read something that inspires you. Or something that you find relatable.
Comments (6)
Well Said Emily. If you are indeed talking about yourself - I do not see your comments the same way. I see them as knowing you read the piece. But I agree with the sentiment of the poem. Nicely Done Emily.
Self criticism, or lashing out?! Either way, go easy ☺️ Less judgement = more joy 😉
Sometimes poetry (writing) is first of all feeling, then other things...
Omgggg gurllll, you gotta tell me who is this about! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
"Afraid to type the wrong meaning, so you start re-reading, and erasing the comment you should have posted anyway"- I do this for sure.
hmmm, who pissed in your wheaties