Big Black Watcher
Hondo Lane and his obsession of Panthida
By Alena CaranovaPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Oh little kitten so grey and sweet,
Come on over you little treat.
This big black watcher looking over you,
What he does is not to harm you.
If he goes a little a-stray,
RUN baby kitty! Run away.
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Alena Caranova
I’ve never shared my work before. So this is brand new for me. I’m hoping that by taking on some of the challenge prompts I can work regularly on developing characters. Maybe even write a few poems, confessions OR add some Potent content.
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I literally sang this poem. It was so much fun...✨ The best part was;" Run baby kitten; Run away" 😃💖