Between Compass and Backfire
Walking Through the Dog's Asshole End of Town
...a journey south, 10 miles as the crow flies
well... it would have been south if I had a compass
and who still uses 10 miles as the crow flies nowadays?
I deliberately took the wrong side street—side quest
against my better judgment and the internal sat nav
To see what I could see as I sauntered into areas
unknown and unseen at least to me, you see, it was
the rougher end of town, the "don't dare set foot there"
where they can smell the blood of outsiders
and will give you dirty looks until you leave the vicinity
The nettle—it grows under the strawberry
and the wholesome berries ripen and thrive
dwelling with fruit of baser quality
Baser indeed—with the arses hanging out and tinfoil burnouts
Fortunately, a trip through no man's land of the poor
is a holiday for me—not for them
callous? more than likely, but I'm too happy-go-lucky
to care, to wish for anything other than what I have
they can have their own wishes—I'm not their saviour
as I take another interesting turn—on a whim—like
this is my Disneyland—my day-off expedition
I see an old man sitting with a can in one hand
and a cig in the other. He looks 89—but I swear—
he's 50—don't ask me how I...
~
Crash!
~
Something smashed. My headlights?
No wait—I'm not in a car. An engine backfired and
something smashed—crashed to the ground, and babies
can be heard singing—the songs of their oppression
broken windows—boards over doors, and gardens that
well, I don't want to say they're like trash sites, but
they are.
Then I saw—I saw an angel.
She had her teeth still intact, no track marks or
dead behind the eyes expressions on her face
just a pretty young thing on a losing streak
she's wearing shoes and is pretty pretty—I...
I think she's coming up to speak, so I
Prince Charles her wit "Camilla, I love you"
I told my angel, she was my grace and calm
her honeyed words trickled from her lips
like the last embrace between those two characters
honeyed lips treacled would be funnier.
turning yet another corner in this maze
of despair takes me to a set of houses
I say houses when hovels would be better
a set of hovels with ill intent
if you don't believe houses can have ill intent
you're a bigger fool or smarter genius.
the house just bled pain—suffering, and a little
misplaced trust in JD Vance.
Some people can't be helped.
Life, it seems, is about realising that—leaning into the magical chaos
it's about appreciating...
love left me a little blind, with the tongue of her mouth
and the thumb of her arm—I know—Eye know
I can love her better.
Love tho, based on the short time we've spent together
walking through the dog's asshole end of town,
seems—presumptuous.
Where's my tie?
Muay Thai, et es partum e parti,
ego disperdam illum
mulli madrepsid oge itrap e mutrap se te
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Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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Comments (6)
What an intense and beautifully written poem! Such vivid imagery and emotion. Is this the correct translation? "and you are born from part, I will destroy him, the mother of all, and the mother of all, if you"
This journey was unexpected, from a detour to fantasy to mind gone mad. Paul, the images in your mind must be dazzling. What is the actual translation, this is what I got : ‘ Muay Thai, it's pairt o' the pairt, A'll skelp him Mony a mither's son and faither's son's been there afore ye’
Well, that kinda deteriorated rather quickly. Interesting walk, sir!
The beginning reminded me of the time Harry Potter ended up in Knockturn Alley instead of Diagon Alley. My favourite part was when the babies sang the song of their oppression. Loved your poem!
I was enthralled until "dogs asshole end of town" entered the conversation and I couldn't stop laughing!! Well done, Paul!!
Oo!! This was really interesting! You took such a wild journey and everything was so vivid. You're always a very descriptive poet but this was special even by those standards. Loved this!